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Day by day
Night by night
Step by step
I fall in love
A love so incomprehensible
So vivid
So unique
So wild, that not even the reign of god could control
A passion so deep
A need so necessary
A want so strong, the universe would not handle
I love you today
Iíll love you tomorrow.

Iíll love you forever
one of my newer poems
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Angelaica Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2008
nice :) i have some of my own... altho they sux haha ;p
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Unlabeled-X-Retarded Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2007
love it :D
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angelsbloodanddust Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2006
I LOVE IT!!!!!
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Probot Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2004   Traditional Artist
hey THEBLUEMAGE, is your avatar from goldensun?
I love that game, i just beat it
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Probot Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2004   Traditional Artist
this is a nice one.... I like it, i think it is one of your best yet...... again with the crazy flow. AND THE BIG WORDS LIKE INCOMPREHENSIBLE (thats great, I know alot of big words but i never use them) AND I CAN SPELL THEM, are you proud?? :meditate:
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gototha Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2004
lol thanks
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Probot Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2004   Traditional Artist
yah lol
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Hasishiko Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2004   Writer
aww, its so sweet. :clap: very nice jr
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gototha Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2004
*bows* thank you, your too kind
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Hasishiko Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2004   Writer
yer welcome! ^^
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YoUr-x-PoIsOn-x-GiRl Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2004  Student
I LOVE THIS.... i <3 you... and i cant wait til the day we can be together!
*you better feel loved*

bUt... beside the fact that i i LOVE you... i want you to know that this poem to me... is alot... and i LOVE IT!
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VentusAerus Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2004  Student General Artist
Verily, thou hast fortuitous command of thy words. *favorite'd*
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gototha Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2004
........................................ ..................monkey?
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lmcdigidesigns Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2004  Student Digital Artist
aww its so sweet! i love otha!
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gototha Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2004
no you dont dont lie to me
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FoxyLesley Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2004
^^ I liked it last night.. and I like it again! Bravo :clap:
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gototha Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2004
lol thanks
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